I did not notice your open heart,
Now I sit I'm falling apart.
You stayed away, then moved on.
What did I do, Where'd I go wrong?
I called you up to talk for a while.
You would not pick up, I could not smile.
So now I sit alone and cry,
I lost you and don't know why.
I miss your smile, I miss your touch,
I miss you so much.
What did I do, What did I say?
How could I let you get away?
Now I lost a special friend,
that I wanted til the end.
I wanna hold you close and tight,
Now I can't I don't feel right.
I know now it will be tough,
but I can handle it, I'm strong enough.
3 comments:
rebkah this is not a comment on this paticular writing its on your workshop piece "time to move on" but unfortuantley you dont have it up here now but i really do encourage you put it up, when i read it, it was breath taking you somehow took some emotions out of me which i have experienced in the past and that im also going through now in a way. It was so good i dont even know how to critique it. keep up the writing
You should really be a poet...i love this poem toooo..
wow this piece was excellent, i guess i like it so much cuz i can relate to this poemm in so many ways.this poem remind me of something i have been fighting for for the past 8 months, knowing that someone else is feeling the same way. show how small is this world.
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